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Is this within your control?

I recently spent a week at one of my happy places—Rancho La Puerta, a wellness resort in Baja, California, Mexico. Early morning mountain hikes, healthy smoothies by the pool, challenging yoga practices, and talks on nurturing your emotional health. We … Continue reading

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You can’t hide who you are

“Samantha” was one of my favorite clients last year. A hard worker with parents who had endured multiple layoffs, she wanted to write about what she had learned from her family’s experience. There was great material here—she had stepped up to … Continue reading

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The Bad Essay

In last week’s post, I discussed whether an essay can make or break an admissions decision. The answer: it depends. If you don’t have “the goods”—the grades and test scores—a good or even great essay will rarely push you from the … Continue reading

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Can an essay make or break your college admissions decision?

The short answer: it depends. The longer answer: If you don’t have the grades and the test scores a college expects from its applicants—in other words, if you aren’t academically prepared—it is extremely unlikely for your essay to push you over … Continue reading

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Bird by Bird

In Bird by Bird: Instructions on Writing and Life, author Anne Lamott recounts her late father’s advice to her brother: Thirty years ago my older brother, who was ten years old at the time, was trying to get a report on birds … Continue reading

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Jenny’s Story, Part 3

 Part 1 and Part 2 of Jenny’s Story, in case you missed them. Jenny had lots of funny ideas to write about—Teletubbies, quesadillas made-to-order in Math class, Ashton Kutcher, among them. But could any of these funny ideas be transformed into … Continue reading

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Jenny’s Story, Part 2

Last week we met my client Jenny. You can read the first part of her story here. “Yes!” I said to Jenny. “You can write about funny!” She’d already told me a few stories that had me in hysterics. How … Continue reading

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